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Anyone written a value proposition? If so, could you critique mine

kjcba8101

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Dec 9, 2007
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This is my first time writing a value proposition and I wanted to get some honest feedback from some of you that were familiar with them.

Here it is-

(Company name withheld) provides best-in-class variable frequency drive (VFD) solutions for pumping applications in the irrigation and water transfer industry.

We engineer and systematically package user friendly control systems that lower customer downtime, maximize pump life, lower daily operating costs and outlast the competition. Our VFD system combines an operator friendly interface, exceptional performance on both single and three phase input, and decades of manufacturing expertise.



Can you give me your ideas and impressions?

Thanks.
 
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