A few small critiques:
When she walks in the door and you focus on the Money Machine sign - you should stay focused on it just slightly longer. Just enough to emphasize it.
Some of your animated money falling down at the end is a bit jerky. Might smooth out that motion a bit.
Not a big fan of the fade in the wording at the end. I'd just have it appear and be there a bit longer. Let people focus on it just a bit longer. Kind of like the sign at the beginning.
Love the music.
Great camera work. Lighting was spot on.
And you fixed the hardest part of video - the audio. Since it was just dubbed over music you didn't have to worry about audio at all. That's high production value with much less hassle.